Tuesday 14 September 2021

Hurly burly

 Title Hurly burly


Author Paul mason



My book is about John Macbeth. He likes to go and look for gold. One day after looking for gold he went to go bowed his head to the storm then he went to the path of the creek. The air was filthy, cold rain. Once he got to the camp he started to rub his eyes. When he stopped rubbing them he saw these three creatures: they were skinny, white, they had long hair and were also really tall. They were calling his name three times once he closed them they vanished out of thin air. His brother came and took him somewhere. He showed Macbeth a circle of yellow lines, a golden round colour. He looked at the pan then he looked back at his Duncan. Macbeth’s heart started to knock on his ribs. Months later this blasted creek says his brother. She has finally paid off. Duncan can still talk to Macbeth but he doesn’t pay attention.




After his adventure he went back home to talk to his wife about the things he saw and about his adventure about him self trying to look for gold.

 



2 comments:

  1. Hi Christian I really like your writing about Hurly burly. It is so cool! Maybe next time you could check your spelling. Keep up the good work. By Kahurangi, from Ahipara School.

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  2. Tell us more Kono. You're doing great with telling stories. Keep it up.

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