Wednesday 16 September 2020
The BMX race
After school Sarah and her friend Josh always rode their bike down at the local BMX track. One afternoon, they found out that a BMX competition was going to be held at the track on sunday.There’s no use you entering,’’ Josh said To Sarah, “because you’ll never beat the boys. we’re much stronger and faster
than “We’ll see about that,’’ replied Sarah,
who was determined to win.
On race day, Sarah lined up with the
other riders. One of the boys smirked
at her. On the starter's signal the eight
riders set off at full speed. Sarah gritted
her teeth and pedalled than she had ever
padalled before.
Down the steep hill and around
the berms she raced catching the
leaders, Ahmmed and Josh.
The huge crowed cheered as
Sarah landed the double jump
safely and crowsed the finish
line first.
Terific race Sarah!'' shouted Josh.
You'er definitely as fast as the
boys.
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Hi my name is Logan. I’m a year 6 from Paihia school. I like your post because it tells me a lot about Bmx Biking. I think you have put all the correct punctuation in the right places too. I also like this post because I like biking to. What do you like better bmx biking or mountain biking?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is George,And I am a year 6 in glenbrae school,I like the story that you have wrote.I really like it but can you space out the letters and make the letters big so we can read the words.
ReplyDeleteKind regrets George.