Title: Boy on the bike
Author: Bronwen wall
My book is about Mac and h
is dad. They were traveling from Cape Reinga down to Wellington.
They were traveling on the beach,
then Mac and his dad were going through the woods, then they made
it out of the woods and stopped at a sign.
A year earlier Mac came back from saint john cdet training
with a plan, Mac wanted to raise some money so
saint john could
afford to buy more ambulances, but how would you raise this money
Mac's parents said they wanted to know how I’ll ride my bike he said.
He wanted people to know that he wanted to help saint john,
and they will also
want to help too. Mac waved a book in front
of his parents. It was a guide of cycling trips around New zealand.
At the back
of the book I found the ultimate trip, cycling the length of the country.
But Mac was only 9 when they were going on the trip together. Mac and
his parents worked out a compromise, Mac would cycle the length
of the North land.
Mac and his dad always train every weekend some days some days they
both cycle 80 km’s other days their rides are shorter sometime in
the holidays they cycle seville days.
Mac and his dad were traveling at first there first site they traveled to
was the desert they were biking
threw, they stopped at a cabin because they wanted a rest then hang
there close and also set up there camp they also had some
things to eat which are bananas, apples, baizle nuts, salted peanuts,
muesli bar,
ham roll, yoghurt, biscuit, orange juice and also tea.
Twenty two days after he first put foot onto pedals Mac cycled into
Wellington with all kinds of emotions.
Mac's bike had really big tyres. He could ride on rocks, hills, and also
mountains. Mac’s money raised over 7,000$ which made Mac really happy.
Hi Kono it's me Ahi from Ahipara school. I really liked your story you did. Maybe next time you could make sure your writing is not off the page. Blog ya later!
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ReplyDeleteKedjron here from Ahipara school. I really like your blog post about a boy on the bike. Maybe next time you could place your blog post on the page.
Keep up the good work, blog ya later.
Kia ora Kono, it´s Cullen from Ahipara school. I really liked your story about the boy on the bike. Maybe next time you can make sure the story won´t go off the page. Blog ya later!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a cool story Kono. WoW!. Keep it up Kono and keep share the story.
ReplyDeletethank you guys for all the coments and i finxed it up so yeah thank all of yous and you guys keep up the work your guys classes
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