I am still blogging …

I am still blogging … 

but I’ve moved.

Click here

to visit my new blog

and see the next stage of my learning journey.

Comments are closed here. Please comment on my new blog.

Sports day for monster

 TITLE: Sports day for monster

ILLUSTRATOR: Janice Marriott, Scott Pearson

My book is about a little monster. He was only a monster so one day in monster school monster and his friend Jack they both looked at a big list of sports stuff monster wanted to try the long jump he said to his friend jack that he liked to jump.

So the monster went to the long jump first and ran with  all his speed. His teacher said good job monster but there is no more sand to jump. Sorry, said monster then monster went to go and try something else. 

he went to his friend Jack so then he went to have a try throwing the ball but the ball went really far . Monster and his friend Jack went to go find it but Monster lost it but then all of the kids shouted and said Hooray for monster, then Monster said Hooray for me he said.  

I WANT TO FLY

 TITLE: I want to fly

ILLUSTRATED: Judy Lawn, Richard Hoit

My book is about a little rabbit who wanted to fly so he went and asked his friend the frog whenever the frog jumps he feels like he is flying so then the rabbit went to try it but he fell onto his nose.

After the rabbit went to the frog he went to his little tiny friend. The grasshopper told the rabbit,  when he jumps fast he feels like he is flying so then the rabbit tried it with leaves on his arm but then he fell onto his nose again.

So after trying his friends moves there was a hawk they were both talking to each other.  Then the hawk said jump onto his back and the rabbit listened to the hawk went all the way into the sky. The rabbit was flapping his  legs, and his arms were flying. Hawk and the rabbit were both on top of a mountain then the hawk said stay here for lunch said hawk then the rabbit ran the mountain as fast as he could then he went back to his friends.      

THE DARK

  TITLE: THE DARK

ILLUSTRATED: PAULINE SIEWERT, NICOLE BAXTER

So my book is about a little boy named Fred and he was really scared in the dark. One night when Fred's grandpa came into his room and told him a story, after Fred's grandpa was finished with his story he went to sleep so he went and turned off the light then Fred shouted no do not turn off the turn the light off.

Then when his grandpa herd it he went back and asked him why then Fred told him that there is a scary fairy when he turns off his light then Fred told his grandpa, about scary fairy but Fred did not know that his grandpa has seen a seen scary fairies before so then Fred’s grandpa said to Fred to shut his eyes and think of a friendly fairy so then Fred quickly shut his eyes and think of it.

Then after thinking about it his grandpa went back to bed so when the light was off he could see the friendly fairy she was sitting on the chair so then every night the friendly fairy looked after Fred everynight he goes to sleep. 

THE END

                       

Little monsters

 TITLE: Little monster

ILLUSTRATOR:  Rhiannon Fieldings and Chris chatterton 

My book is about this monster and her name is Belch. Belch had horns on the top of her head and she was going down the creaking stairs instead of going up stairs to go to sleep. Belch had gleaming big eyes and also growled and she had ten minutes to bedtime then she went to her table and started to eat a massive amount of jelly slurping a lot of jelly into her mouth.

Wheee, Walop, Whoosh why is there so much noise. Belch  was playing with all of her toys, now there are eight minutes to bedtime. In monster houses far and wide belch thought. Belch had seven minutes time until her bed time so then she went back down the hallway blech treads.

Squeeeeek goes the window, dark shadows coming through the door . It was six minutes to bedtime but then Belch said who is coming through the door. It was heard of a lot of little tiny monsters they were all playing inside of Belch's house . Some of the little monsters were upside down, some were eating food and also the other monsters were swinging on the lights. Then belch yelled and said right it is now our bed time with anger.

So then all of the little monsters went beach home so then belch was pleased to be alone then it was only two more minutes until bedtime then belch went back upstairs and went into her bedroom she got into her bed and she was warm and also sleepy and then she fell asleep. 

         

mathimatics

Line of symmetry it means a perfect line that matches which mean that the both sides are evenly matched.

1/2 of 2 = 1

2/3 of 4 = 2.6666667

4/5 of 6 = 4.8

 

The red ball

Author: Reneta Hopkins

My book is about these two sisters and their names were May and Ida. Ida is shy, quiet, clumsy and she is also the oldest. Her sister May was the opposite of her. She is really loud and also fast, that's why she never misses a catch.

When Ida and May climbed the tree May would need to help get down Ida, to Ida this was back to front. Ida is older than May but May was always better than Ida at everything, it was not fair on that day.

The two girls fell out of this world and went into another of Idas envy was worse than ever before, that morning the principal has made an announcement at assembly, a year 5 student was going to that regional athletic competition, the principal had called out Mays name.

As her smiling sister bounded to the front something, cold twisty in Ida’s stomach, it felt like a snake made from ice. Later on the walk home May was so excited to notice Ida’s dark mood she tossed and catched her favourite red ball while chattering happily.

All the while about the new sneakers and training schedules then finally Ida could take no more, surprising both of them she snacthed the ball out of mid-air and flung it into the playground they were passing.

Hey why did you do that, beacuse Ida retro I am sick of that ball and I am also sick of you, you're not great as you say you are tears sprang out of mays eyes, you're mean.She said it quietly and then she turned and went to go and get the ball.

Jump May said the fairy then Ida screamed. Ida leapt off her swing and then fell really hard onto the ground and winding herself. As Ida struggled to breath she could see May’s ball, lying under the slide.

 Holding the ball,she was running to the roundabout which was slowing down. Leaning hard onto the crossbar, Ida made the roundabout turn the other way faster and faster Ida leapt onto it. When the roundabout was spinning, as fast as Ida could make it go.

Fairy folk  so wild and free give my sister back my sister back, Ida shouted. When her head started to stop spinning Ida found herself in a forest. Nearby Ida could hear laughing and also singing, then Ida felt afraid but she had to go and find her sister. So then Ida was following the sounds.

May didn’t have to go that far, said Ida. The green-eyed girl was also dancing in the circle with other children. No, not children, Ida thought, Farries. In the middle stood May, then May shouted.

Still enchanted by the fairy’s spell. Then the green eyed girl stepped in the circle, you got your wish she was sneering, then begone to say please begged Ida, I made a mistake. The fairy smiled a threaches smile.

Silly girl, let’s see if you could get it right this time, said the green eyed girl. Then Ida raised her hand and made a hand sign. Suddenly inside the circle there were three Mays. If you can pick your real sister, the green eyed fairy, she could go with you.

Ida’s heart was beating really fast. Ida made herself think that she would not step into the circle if she did she would have stayed and danced with them forever.

Were the sister’s always good to each other, did they have no reason to be envy of each other. Ida would remember the time now almost a dream when briefly she’d have three and she and may would look at each other and the